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Monday, July 27, 2009

girl and raining


It was raining
when i stood under a tree
my black attire soaked
cool hugged my body
sadness and loneliness
were my faithful company
where can i seek for a happiness?

the rain poured heavily
i still there
watching for an angel to come
was there really a true angel?
nobody know
so do I
if there were one
could I asked them
for shine
so i could finished my journey

the rain was ended
it was the time
to complete my search
searched for a happiness
and true love
frankly i said
i felt jealous
for them
who already had their happiness

i just only had one request
please
taking care of your happiness
because
it need just
a dark shadow
to destroy it forever

p/s: this is my first poem
huhu

4 respon:

Niji said...

suka puisi ni.
mudah difahami dan takde perkataan maksud yg terlalu tersirat :)
hurm..
nice idea and i like how you compare 'sorrow' with 'rain'.

but for me, i saw rain as a sign of calmness and tranquility. i guess nature has a lot of meanings
:P

fatin arina said...

hehe
sgt boring hari itu
buat puisi

sye ase sedih time hujan
tyme2
tu ase sayu ja
hehe

yes
btul kata awk!

Niji said...

buat la lagi! best ape~

fatin arina said...

hehe

kalau der idea saya wat!